The only nitpick I have is that some of the voice acting could've been louder. Otherwise, this is pretty good and pretty funny. Keep it up! :)
Thanks, will try to keep improving
Cool animation, Very smooth but could do with a few improvements. This site is, I believe, only in English. If you head over the the voice actor forum there are plenty of people there who would voice the animation in English for you and all they would ask is to be credited.
The other is volume, At one part of the animation all the voices go really quiet, So I turn up my volume, Then it gets loud again. Great animation, hope to see more from you. :D
Sorry, try to keep improving, Thanks.