Took me like 3 times watching it to understand and enjoy it... That is a problem inherently. If you continue to practice and persue animation though I'm sure you would improve.
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note* this is not my best work in fact im just a beginner so if your gonna be putting bad comments please just keep iit to yourself ^^ im not a pro...
This is being used for my animation final at school
(yes, i know the background looks unfinished)
This is great for a beginner, much better than I am. XD
Good work mate keep it up
Soniario responds:
thank you very much ;D
theres school for animation? i assumed everyone just jumps on the wagon with whatever they got.
pretty good.
I understand that you're a beginner, but focus on a simple plot rather than this. This kind of lacks focus/art direction.