This was some weak sauce. I don't know if the script for this was an ad lib, but it certainly seems that way. Relying on "random" humor is always a recipe for disaster.
HA, ooooh Ed...
Your naration was awesome and brought a lot of extra personality into the animation :D
The rhyming story was funny too... haha I mean who doesn't like random epic nonsense?
Haha, good job, keep up the quality work :]
Rhyming stories are always fun to hear. Art was simple but it didn't need to be detailed. Intresting use of folding paper as a background. Hope your schedule allows you to make more cartoons in a year because this one was enjoyable.
Awesome Movie Funy-mony +5 Stars :D