Finally, i get to see your animation. As i already thought, your music seems to fit in. Apart from that, you could as already mentioned work on your art style, this is also maybe the reason i didnt get the second part, i dont know what it is about...
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Some people believe and see fairy in warm weather well this is a story about a winter fairy. I hope you enjoy.
flashmakeit responds:
well it is about two butterflies or fairies that mate in the summer and fall. Then comes the cold winds of the winter and she dies as she has her baby caterpillar. I think I need to work on my animation skills and improve my stories. I will try to make my next movie better. Thanks for your reveiw because it did help.
Well that was actually pretty cool. Your animation really could use some work, though. You've obviously got a lot of artistic talent (I checked out those paintings you uploaded), you just need to work on translating your potential into flash. Keep up the good work!
flashmakeit responds:
I like the way you analyze and I will try to improve.
A pretty nice animation, with smooth music in the background, even if graphics somehow seem a bit distorted. Not sure what really happens in the end there though... looks like she's giving bith and then... just falls off the pine cone? Always thought fairies where a humanoid species too, but these look more like butterflies? It's a tale of life though, keep it going!
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flashmakeit responds:
Thanks for the generous well written review. I am thinking about taking a class on adobe animations so my work will not be so distorted. Or maybe YouTube tutorials.
Well the animation could've been better, though the color scheme is nice. Just try harder next time. Good luck!
flashmakeit responds:
I will try harder next time because I have a plan. Thanks for the luck and viewing this movie.
