The tone and subject matter is quite interesting, but the presentation could use some work. I don't have a problem with the abstract background, but it'd be interesting to see at least a few different ones over the course of two minutes. The warping helps a little, but it still becomes a little boring.
The pacing could probably be improved too, as far as how quickly each line is delivered. But that might have more to do with the text-to-speech voice you seem to be using. I understand what you're going for with that, since it's supposed to be a non-human being speaking, but it'd probably just be more interesting to listen to if you recorded yourself speaking and applied a few audio effects.
I also liked the film filter. It might help that look to find a more "sci-fi" looking font to accompany the narration. The one you have now is a bit plain.
Three stars for the concept though, I'd love to see it expanded on and the aesthetic improved in future installments.