wtf

i don't get it. the texts are really thin

The subtitles didn't last long enough to read and were too transparent to read, it was hard to follow what was going on or what happened, Imrove on artwork (it wasn't bad, but not top notch either, your animation was ok, and last maybe add some music.

All the text moved by too fast to read, and was too transparent to make out.
I have absolutely no idea what it was about.