I love the soundtrack.at the beginning..it really caught my attention. I laughed a little but you should flesh out your plan of execution a lot more. I don't think the story made that much since. The drawings are not bad at all. spend more time on that. Lastly, around the time that the music changed to a "horror scene" the voice audio got really loud...not sure why.

I guess overall, good start..spend more time on the project for better quality...and for planning I would suggest learning how to storyboard. (If you don't already know)
That way you have a general idea of the direction you're trying to take.

PLEASE ADD A PLAY/REPLAY BUTTON TO YOUR PROJECT....ITS NOT THAT HARD. Thats my biggest pet peeve. Thank God for the NG Collapse Button. Anyways I hope this helps a tiny bit.

Your animation is getting much better but you should focus much harder on fixing your sound levels. The music is on the same level as your vocals and I can barely hear you, and then when you exclaim the volume is almost unbearable.