It's not too bad for a trailer, but you could use some sharpening for your characters, though the movements are somewhat fluid, so there aren't too many points to critique...
This is a school project I made for tech class. The assignment was a 30-60 second video about an inanimate object with no dialogue, so I decided to take pictures of the computer lab and take them home with me to make a stick fight. I hope you enjoy.
It's not too bad for a trailer, but you could use some sharpening for your characters, though the movements are somewhat fluid, so there aren't too many points to critique...