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Puns...Animated!

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puns...animated :)

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It feels a ilttle inexperienced but has a lot going for it. Voices are half-decent, drawings and backgrounds are simple and easy to understand.

Future suggestions: I'd try to think about movement between keyframes, even selecting one of the 12 animation principles (e.g., Ease in / ease out) and seeing if you can't carry it through the piece.

Also, there's no reason for these exact puns - I wish they meant something specifically to the characters so that the characters had a drama of their own.

Hope that's useful; would love to see more advanced work from you!

mPoon responds:

thanks for the encouraging feedback, this was something my friends and I joked around during a get together and we thought it would be cool to make an animation out of it. But now I'm working on a new animation that has more of a story line to it.

Your comments were definitely useful and I will take it into consideration for my next animation piece!

french lesson in a flash!!!!

mPoon responds:

oui oui, c'est possible!

Unique idea and it's been utilised nicely. Tight focus on animation. The visuals left a lot to be desired but they're not exactly necessary. Top props for a neat idea and execution.

mPoon responds:

thanks! I'll definitely keep trying to refine my animation skills!

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Nov 3, 2014
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