The animation and audio need a lot of work, but I enjoy the literal puns enough to watch more. If you're really into making this a series, try to add more than one single pun for episode.
The animated series of Beetlejuice had a whole damm lot of literal jokes, I bet some of them could give you a couple of ideas.
good little movie, and it had some pretty neat and likeable characters!
cool movie, nice style, and cute face expressions....
(i also liked how in the end, the face expressions matched those of the title screen! clever.)
nice work for a new animation, and quite funny, with that joke.... (elevator joke, cool).
i would only suggest to you to make the next episodes a bit longer and to let us know more about the characters.
other than that, it was good.
First off, thank you!
I'm working on the style a lot to improve it, in addition to some expresions (arm movements, more face expresions...)
The joke may be a bit old but it's pretty good as you've said, yeah.
My animations (I have made more before) tend to be very short (20 or 30 seconds), but I might take a chance at making them longer.
And again, thanks for the review :)
Not bad. It had decent animation as well as a very clever joke.
The quality is a bit unclear too but I'll try and fix that in the future.