pretty good but...
you really need to slow don the text in most of it. I could read it but I had to read so fast that I could barely see what was goin on. So slow it down. Otherwise it was pretty funny at times.
Author Comments
It's ok... Sadly,it's very large, but that's due to my crud Flash talent. Dial-up, be sad; broadband, be impatient.
EDIT: I should of included a website plug in case anyone wanted to see the other 9 strips....
www.geocities.com/hot_sprites
EDIT2: I never intended to put this on Newgrounds up until I realized that this thing wouldn't work on Geocities or the like, because of its size. I am kind of sorry about how the "inside" humor and such. I'm also going to work on making easier to read captions. I knew that was wrong, but I'd sacrifice my timing to fix it...
it was awsome!
originality is the main part of yours!
its badass all my 5 r belong to this
but 1 thing...
the text goes by way too fast!
work on that and u may have it to the top 50
Genoius pure comic genious
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nuff said
realy realy good
spectacular! great film.. all you need to do is make the text a bit slower KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!-papaBass
Heh
This is still a great movie, sorry for you other guys who can't read uber fast, but still, its great!