Could be better.

Pretty much how we all start out. Hatless and scrubby. But as long as you never give up, actually bother to look up how each class handle, go on Youtube for some pro-commentary teaching,...ect...then you'll get gud in no time.
Also, personal pro-tip: Unless you already used to playing a fast running, fragile character in FPS., DON'T start out playing Scout. You will die a lot, and feel less motivated to practice.
And oh yeah, never stand still to shoot for any class, ever.

nice, and adorable animation with cool face expressions and stuff.
nice moments of action, combined with alot of humour in this, and cool parts with jokes...
this is funny, and i quite enjoyed it, it was well drawn, witha fast animation style, and a cool story going on.
as for the gaming part; dont worry, im slightly better than you. maybe we shoudl team up in shooter games. :) lol! hahahahaha!

good work, plz do more.