style and animations were quite good. Story was just OK. I kno, not easy to master both, but maybe because as you say it was rushed and more of a style/graphics exercise than a story writing one.
Animation I worked on 3 days before it was due... was a bad idea. But the results came out alright in the end. Some stuff missing and same scene are... a bit rushed (well all of it was but more so then others). Was an Affect Effects class so most of it had to be done in it, so it has that puppet style animation.
style and animations were quite good. Story was just OK. I kno, not easy to master both, but maybe because as you say it was rushed and more of a style/graphics exercise than a story writing one.
The music set the mood and it was an interesting scene. You could've made the shoulder strap better.
The animation itself is top-notch, love the realistic tones and fuzzy outlines, but as far as ploi goes... I'm not really getting it! Looks good, and sounds good, but doesn't make much sense. Keep it going!
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