I would say more work is required, a structure and a story, not much point to it I don't think.
this is my first in newgrounds
i need I have to improve my animation, I hope you give my opinion
original story:lawak under 18 - works: zint
animation: bakhtiar93tiar
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I would say more work is required, a structure and a story, not much point to it I don't think.