There's potential, but some SoundFX or music, perhaps a cut, would give it more tension
Author Comments
That Moment when you block everything else out while you play on your phone
Shadowpunch responds:
Yeah sorry, It's my first attempt and I was in kind of a rush. My next few projects should get better though. Thanks for the honest opinion.
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2.50 / 5.00
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- Oct 1, 2014
- 10:11 PM EDT
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- Comedy - Original