The joke was alittle too simplistic, and the dialogue wasn't all to clever. The animation was passable, it's fluid but the character designs just look weird, but I suppose that's nitpicking. Aside from that, the voice acting was decent and the audio quality was pretty solid. I think you could have potential so long as you keep trying and working on the jokes. Keep Trying!
I’m not sure what kind of joke you were expecting, but I think this is one of those situations where “If you didn’t like it, then you didn’t get it.” I also can’t take you seriously about the character designs based on your avatar. I hope the voice acting was good considering I do all the characters. I’m glad you think I have potential. Gosh golly I hope I make it somewhere.
Oh I do miss Newgrounds... sarcasm sarcasm sarcasm.