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A 3D animated thriller about a business worker and his attempts to maintain his reputation in front of his boss at his hotel. Story was inspired by a short film (can't remember the name) I saw years ago as a kid.

This was my second film. Not the best animation or story in the world, lol, but any reviews would help!

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I finally got it after viewing it many times it was a joke gone wrong he meant to mske him trip but didnt think he would fall off the ledge. Nice story surprise ending.

ThilakanathanStudios responds:

Thanks again datcrazyblackboy :) Hehe, sorry for making you watch it many times, I really need to improve on my screenplay, lol..

Had a lot of issues, the animation was very stale and some parts were highly dragged on, but the story seemed to be going somwhere but after the big twist it just seemed to have added filler.

ThilakanathanStudios responds:

Sorry for the late reply, I just noticed the comment now. Thanks again TimFelt for the honest feedback. I'll make a note of this and work on improving for my current film project.

Nice work, love the really bright lighting in the street scenes. I'm sure you already know tht those walk/run cycles could have used extra work. Next time you need voice actors try fiverr.com maybe? I've had some success getting the folks there to do some lines for like five dollars each.

ThilakanathanStudios responds:

Haven't heard about fiverr.com, I'll try and give it a shot next time, thanks for the cool suggestion! And yes, I didn't spend enough time as I should have on those walk/run cycles. I'll make a note of it for a film I'm currently making, thanks for the feedback!

The face expression was little bit weird but the story was told good.It funny how many dead can happening over one briefcase. I like how you use the main character to foreshadow what going to happen next.The text was small to read and the part was the boss was getting angry could have been shorter.This film was great to watch.

ThilakanathanStudios responds:

Thanks DarkRiverSaben, really glad you liked the story! I'll make a note regarding the feedback about the face and text, I'll work on improving it for sure in the next film. Thanks for watching :)

Strange strange strange story.
The model and texture quality is really good though.
But there's a problem with your hair simulator, that or you need to revise the hair textures.
Animation isn't that great either, but you show a lot of promise ^^
Keep making and keep improving!

ThilakanathanStudios responds:

There's a lot in terms of character animation that I need to learn. I'll focus more on the hair and animation (and obviously the story) in my next film! Thanks Tattorack for the helpful feedback and great to know the models and texture quality was good!

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Sep 10, 2014
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