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White Girl Foundation

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Okay! Next up on the list, well this wasn't as generic as the let's player short posted earlier. Animation is fine enough, audio's nice and clear, but the joke was just meh. I think that's really the only problem with your shorts, is that the joke or premise that's involved just never really comes off as very funny nor enjoyable. Now, its not terrible by any stretch again but I think you're capable of pulling off something alittle more hilarious than the obvious stereotypes.

Chauder responds:

yea, im gonna start working on my joke writing :)

I do say this was a fair short. It had some humor in it, although you need to fix the audio. I have the audio setting on 100% and I could barely hear it, also there are some animation bugs [They're not very noticeable so I wouldn't worry]. Other than that this was a good, short, and sweet animation. Maybe you'll be able to make a series eventually, haha. -Adolf

Chauder responds:

Thank you for the feedback :) Yes, the audio could have been raised some. It was old recorded audio from a while ago, and I forgot to fix it :P And, I am actually in the script writing process for the first episode of a new series, still to be named. Kind of inspired by EddsWorld.

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Sep 8, 2014
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