Very simple, I get you're working on your abilities to use flash, but I'm not here to tell little kids good job because they drew a stick dinosaur. You don't need 30 seconds of blank screen with music. Work on making the animation cleaner. A smooth animation is a good sign that you took the time to work on your art.

im sorry to blam this. but it isnt quite ready to be submitted in my opinian. the idea is great, to encourage women with less or no hair that they are beautiful. its true that even without hair a woman can be beautiful. but my point to blamming this is only to encourage you to work more at your animation style and such. it seemed that you used multipule layers. this is a good idea, but they must all work together. your womans face moved seperately with her head, her head moved seperately from her hair, and her body moved away from her arm. you just need practice animating and getting used to your program. i have faith that you could learn this. it will take lots of patients and practice though. also a side note, you should practice a little more movement with the woman than just side to side. maybe practice making her hips move a bit, as she was attempting to dance a little sexy and spicy from what i was gathering. but that is up to u. good luck. and hope i helped and did not turn you away from animating... animating is a very hard hobby and talent to learn.