Love the drawings the lip syncing at the begining could still have been nicer - but LOVE the drawings.

(based on what you said on the forums)

I think you should create your own style cause this looks a lot like eddsworld,
but I can see you've put effort in this animation and that's good (:
and I think the only way to improve your next episodes is jut to make more,
because you'll learn a lot from the experience
other than that practice practice practice....

( i hope this helps xd )

YAAAAYAAAA IS AMAZIngG LOVELY ANIMATION GREAT VOCES OVERAL VERY GOOD HOPE FOR MITR
5 STAR YAAAAYAAAA

FANTASTIC. LOVE IT
IM LOOKING OUT FOR NEXT EPISODE