This was ok, This need improvement, maybe a more smoother animation and a better set up for the figures. Also try to make it so the camera doesn't shake. You should also start asking people for voice acting too so you can have more than one voice. Hopefully I get a better set up, maybe I can help you for your next one. I understand, I used to do something like this 5 years ago, but I haven't done it in a while, this might have inspired me to do it again lol.