Was brought to tears by the raw emotion. Left me craving more in cold sweat. literally nearly bit my tongue off in the suspense.

Nah i'm just kidding but it was pretty good for a first submission. Liked the sound effects, gave it a cartoony feel. I love claymation and enjoy seeing it here. I liked the weird body shapes. I wish it was longer but understand how long it takes to make anything with this type of animation. The only real criticism like remark I have is maybe make a little intro or title screen before jumping straight into the animation(ex. Murder Suicide, by yellowklay), that way if it makes its way somewhere else people will know its yours.

Good Luck! Make more.

For your first upload, this is pretty good. While it's short and not particularly entertaining, the animation is remarkably smooth and definitely shows potential. Hope to see more uploads from you in the future.

what the hell XD

As beginner as it is, I actually like it! very fluid and decent-enough 'sound-effects', now just work on making them longer! Looking forward to seeing more from you!