Comment: You should never rush just to get something out, users would rather see good quality. Quality over quantity my friend. Review: it's informative, the animation is good, the art is good, but it needs sound.
2007: Humberto Hernandez, a 24-year-old Oakland, California, U.S., resident, was killed after being struck in the face by an airborne fire hydrant while walking. A passing car had struck the fire hydrant and the water pressure shot the hydrant at Hernandez with enough force to kill him.
This was the most rushed project I have ever done so sorry for any faults haha. Enjoy!
Animation and Production: Menmaro
Special thanks:
Family
All the fellas at LVS
All my friends that have supported me to this moment :D
My tablet for bearing with me
My old PC
Comment: You should never rush just to get something out, users would rather see good quality. Quality over quantity my friend. Review: it's informative, the animation is good, the art is good, but it needs sound.
Yeah I know I shouldn't have rushed but I did want to submit something to the movie jam haha. My next work should show some promise. I was going to add in sound but I ran out of time to submit this :/. Thanks for the comment and review!
no sound and kinda boring
I'm sorry you felt this way and I will work harder to make something that isn't as boring :)
Very short, but it gets the point across. Some sort of sound would be nice, even if it was just some sort of car/city background noise. I liked the stop-motion for when the fire hydrant was about to hit, but I think that moment could have been expanded on a bit more for extra dramatics. Also, at the very end, you need to make the screen showing how Humberto died longer. It's a longer paragraph, so you need to give the adequate amount of time for people to read it without most of them having to pause the video.
Thanks a lot for your critical analysis! I will make sure my next work will be much better, I had intended to put sound in but unfortunately I ran out of time and couldn't add sound. I am still very grateful though!
Well done, fine sir.
Thanks :D much appreciated!