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I made this animation for a film festival at my school, I decided to have a go using the bone tool in Adobe Flash. I won't be using it again. This is a short story of the long way to school after missing the bus, where I run into a lot of strange characters along the way. Any and all feedback is welcome. :D
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First off your animation style is a little flat
But the horse riding scene proves you show potential
Secondly voice acting it was alright
But I'd recommend investing in a better mic
as the sound quality was a little tinny
Also mabe check out the audio portal and find some
Musicians to collaborate with
As I'm pretty sure I heard a bit of red dead in there
Overall I enjoyed 4 stars

LiamJMWilson responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it :D

LOL that was pretty nice after all that he made it just in time to leave :) Nice audio the music was excellent and the voice acting wasn't too terrible.

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LiamJMWilson responds:

Thanks, that means a lot :D

Athough, the animation could've used a bit more work into it, this was pretty good. Kinda made me smile. Keep it up!

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LiamJMWilson responds:

Yeah I know the animation wasn't too good, but I didn't have much time because I was doing this for a competition at school. Thanks for the support.

Very awesome!

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Wasn't bad need a little work on the whole art portion of it, other than that it was pretty great. Cool story, I liked. Thanks!

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3.30 / 5.00

Jul 29, 2014
1:57 PM EDT