There is a lot I want to comment about, firstly, the idea is definately not well thought of. Something more complex would be nicer.

Next you have already have main idea of drawing, just that I know your using a computer mouse to draw. It feels kind of akward drawing like that. Try find a digital drawing tablet, it simulates pen movements smoothly.

Lastly, try to voice act in a more quieter area, I can hear voices in the background.

I think you have potential though, a lot of potential actually.
Hope you luck in the future.

Sorry, but other than the half decent art, this video was not very good at all <_<. You sound like youre younger, so youve got plenty of time to improve. Keep on practicing!

Needs work on vocal volume other than that good job animating.

that was ok I guess. first off to the kid recording audio, next time do it WITHOUT people talking in the background. if this is your first flash then not bad, but if this isn't... smh

Hah, this actually made me chuckle.