well for one. the plot really doesn't make any sense but also the toons you choice really had no reason to be in the same film but don't give up, you gave a solid effort. what I think you ay wanna do is read some books, if you don't wanna read have some audio books(that always works for me) listen to some other writters/ movie stories and find what you wanna make come to life. always try to find something that makes you dream and explore on it. don't give up litle one, your flame is far from being put out.