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Nostalgic as fuck.
To be honest, I thought it was very boring. Your dialouge scenes should have more than a text box that changes every so many frames while the characters are completely static. Add stuff like camera panning, dialogue sound, idle animations and transitions. It doesn't have to be anything super fancy, just something to keep the viewer interested. Keep practicing!
Great job, Luke! Glad to see you are still in the game! :D