The "Michael Bay of Pony Fan Animations".
It looks pretty, but it lacks structure in it's story and expresses it's exposition terribly.
It jumps around allot, and only slightly expresses the plot.
Voice syncing and acting wasn't the best.
And it seems like allot of pretty visuals that were strung together without much consideration as to how relevant it would seem to the story.
It looks pretty, but it has allot of flaws.
I wouldn't mind you taking more time to edit this.
Add more exposition. Princess Celestia's betrayal is only touched ever so slightly.
The theme and message is nice but it falters without a good well structured story to back it up.