ok, animation-wise, this was OK, and in drawings, it was OK, but man:
TOO SHORT. and it didnt had any story.
every good movie must have a beginning, a middle part and an end.
this movie had... randomness.
and randomness is usually good, if you add humour to it....
but this was... ummm confusing.
and link again? everyone does that... try a more original approach, create some characters of your own...maybe it will be better.
i know this was an old animation, but i must suggest some stuff so that you can improve.
you have the skills, you only need a good story, and a solid script.
thats it.