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i made this a long time ago... sorry


if you want to see more please follow the link:


https://www.youtube.com/user/lamf3

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ok, animation-wise, this was OK, and in drawings, it was OK, but man:
TOO SHORT. and it didnt had any story.

every good movie must have a beginning, a middle part and an end.
this movie had... randomness.
and randomness is usually good, if you add humour to it....
but this was... ummm confusing.

and link again? everyone does that... try a more original approach, create some characters of your own...maybe it will be better.

i know this was an old animation, but i must suggest some stuff so that you can improve.
you have the skills, you only need a good story, and a solid script.
thats it.

lamgelus responds:

i will improve in the future if you want to check my latest work, please follow me, thanks for your comment

Its kinda got... story? It has some animation, but the audio isn't good and it's overall just pretty meaningless. Sorry but we want higher quality stuff here.

lamgelus responds:

i will improve in the future if you want to check my latest work, please follow me, thanks for your comment

I'm not trying to be mean, I'm trying to help you out here..
But, the animation looks like it has no heart or soul into it, you need to work on it..
Also, don't really post old animations...

lamgelus responds:

i will improve in the future if you want to check my latest work, please follow me, thanks for your comment

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Jul 11, 2014
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