well this was short and very small....but it had potential man!
and i like that.... did you used frame-by-frame, or tweens for this?
the animation was very swift, and the movement/motion, was quite fast.
i really liked how you did on this cartoon.
but add more in the next one! (or in the same story in this), add more characters, more jokes, more stuff going on, more...anything!
just add some stuff, and make a story with a beggining and an end, and you will be on a good way here.