its good... but can improve a lot.
After befreinding a fellow student known as Serph, Ronald arrives at Youman Academy, where humans and yokai are trained to master magic and other fighting techniques to battle supernatural forces. But what strange characters will he meet at this academy?
Catch this series on Youtube, it gets uploaded there first;
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HAafb-0EsWY
its good... but can improve a lot.
Please go into detail into HOW I can improve it. Any and all feedback helps me greatly. =)