The plot was kinda funny, but it also diplays ppl scaming to get there private infermation.
My first flash video
just about some conartists and victims
If your flash player doesn't work you can watch it here
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wXCKwl2w4M4
The plot was kinda funny, but it also diplays ppl scaming to get there private infermation.
theres also fake ebay and fake vending sites that makes you give card info
Actually, the plot was pretty funny. But, I can't give you too much of a high rating here. I'm sure I don't need to point out that relative to the better videos on Newgrounds, the animation quality, voice acting, etc. is a little lacking. That being said, Newgrounds is full of good animators but not all animations are even as funny as this. This is just the beginning, so keep working on the animation and perhaps your good taste in humor can be applied to a more finished product.
yeah still working on the Adobe flash control.
Thanks for the review man
A little fun. But it seems too unfinished to get any high ratings.
You have a story to tell, but you lack on the animating parts. OH! and try not to eat your microphone :)
lol!
not bad on the animation and it made me chuckle a little but the audio quality was horible if you dont whant to get abtter mic for your future projects then at least try not to put your mouth to close to the mic and maby put a piece of cloth or some other dampening material over it i hope that helps good luck!
you know what, I'll put a sock on the mic
The animation is lacking and the presentation could be a lot better (for example adding something like "start movie" or another indicator on the button)
This kind of story is well known, however you didn't exaggergate on the plot. I like the simple style
oh ok thanks for the review
it means a lot.