Greg, an employee to some boring company is in the middle of sending an important email when all of a sudden his least favorite coworker shows up. Brad.
lol, such ample entertaininment with such a simple thing... I was thinking that little dude was the boss, though, whichy made it a bit odd some passing employee would take such liberties. He really fits the boss stereotype, he's small, bald, strong character, and he's sitting at a desk right in front of a majestic panorama view of the city... making him seem like an employee is the one thing I'd think of improving here, otherwise it's just hilarious! Nice work.
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He asked for it though.
Not bad, but I had to go to the discription for context. You should be able to convey this within the story. Otherwise it was kinda confusing as to why greg all of the sudden just started spazzing out instead of just sending the message. The big problem was that this was extremely drug out and seemed to take way too long for just this little thing.
Thank you for the feedback. A little context, this animation was for my Animation 20 exam. We were to have a video of at least a minute in length ( something wich I only learned after I submitted my storyboard) so I had to stretch every scene a little longer than I would have liked. so yeah definitely longer than it should have been.
I don't know what happened but it seems as though that your video editing software corrupted your Flash movie at around first second of the movie. You may want to take this down, upload the SWF file and be done with it.
Yeah thanks I thought the clipping was only on my side. It should be fixed now though.