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Constructed Madness

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As you can see that this video it just some random sketches of some funny stuff. All of the sounds came from freeesound.org including the intro song. I did try to create my own intro song but unfortunately the sound quality was terrible. Anyways I hope you all enjoy this.

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It was a funny vid, has the same comedy style as stickmen on crack and ASDF movie which i haven't seen in a while and is refreshing. At times the timing of the joke was a little off but other than that great vid.


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guitarrob responds:

Thank you very much. I'll keep in mind about the timing.


madness? this is saif!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! D:<



Ok, nice job. The voices were ok, they sounded pretty funny and suited the movie. The animation was... Meh, not so good, you need to work on it more, but it didn't bother me too much, it was still funny anyway. The jokes were random but funny, just the right level of stupid. The art was quite crappy, but not too crappy, in some respects it actually made the animation funnier. But a little more work on the visuals wouldn't hurt.

I can't help but feel you were just trying to imitate ASDF Movie, which I guess is alright, if you add your own style to it. But it could have done with some color and when the first thing you think is "this is pretty much ASDF Movie only not quite as funny or well made." it's a poor sign. Try making the style just a little more original next time. I wont deduct any points for this, because I like to give the benefit of the doubt in case I'm wrong, I'm just speaking my thoughts, not spitting accusations here.

So it's pretty good, it's good for shits and giggles.


guitarrob responds:

I understand. I've been animating roughly around nine months and I know that some people animate for years. Hopefully I'll get better animating skills in a year or two. But thanks anyway.


It was funny and your animation skills have potential.


guitarrob responds:

Thank you. I'd try my best to improve my animation skills.


This was funny and good at satirizing various problems in modern America. Good job.


guitarrob responds:

Thank you very much. I really appreciate this.

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Score
2.15 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 19, 2014
8:32 AM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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