I was actually pretty impressed by this. It seems to be the best of these short cartoons you're putting up. I always want to review all of my favorite animator's works. The artwork is much better than before. While it could still use some detail, it's quite nice. I appreciated the style.
I really did not know what would happen next. There were a lot of interesting things going on. I'm glad you included the English lyrics. It gives off a nice spiritual sense. I can tell you're getting better.
I like your comments very onest , I do what I can with the time and tools a have
Really nice! I'd have removed the tacky windows movie maker title screen, it looks very unproffesional and gave me low expectations for what turned out to be a nice animation. I liked the poem and the reading was great, loved the guys voice. Unfortunately I don't know spanish so I appreciated the translation in the description, subtitles might have been better though.
The animation is self was decent, the frame rate was a little low but I appreciate traditional animation is a lot of work. Loved the transition at 0:23. Character design was really cool too, and that shot of the mountatin at 0:45 is perfect, loved how it moved. The shot at 0:52 felt far too static, could have had some background drifting by to show the birds speed. The transition to digital animation was nicely done and I liked how you used photographs.
All in all an original and engaging work! Great imagery, appealing character design, intriguing concept!
I didnt know windows movie maker had such a bad reputation , at 0.52 the poem says "still in the height" I wanted to show that when you see a bird gliding high it appears to be static but thanks for the comment I appreciete intelligent feed back
Pretty Gewd!! Very nice hand drawn animation
i enjoyed the backround music, it was smooth and actually pretty relaxing. but i cant understand spanish and couldnt enjoy it that much as i had to read it and assume it was the same pace. nice drawings too.
very well done
its jut a little emthy on the backroud