I was actually pretty impressed by this. It seems to be the best of these short cartoons you're putting up. I always want to review all of my favorite animator's works. The artwork is much better than before. While it could still use some detail, it's quite nice. I appreciated the style.
I really did not know what would happen next. There were a lot of interesting things going on. I'm glad you included the English lyrics. It gives off a nice spiritual sense. I can tell you're getting better.