Dude, potty humor? Only when its done right. This isn't right though, buddy.
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My First flash animation - A short cartoon about exhausted restrooms.
my youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCvEHKUmV10Uj9Is9ja8e3ZA
Well, that was a good effort. The animation was just too low quality and the story was a little to unclear for me.
The animation was bad, really bad.
But on the plus side the voice acting was decent.
You had a good idea. WHere it fell apart was just after they made a run for it. After that, it go so choppy that I couldn't tell what was going on. Keep working at it, though.
raphapower16 responds:
hey thanks yeah I wasn't really sure how to work the camera angles. I mainly made this to see if I could make a animation at all. It was very quick to make. So now I'm going to try do better and take my time.
I found it pointless