Rat is an amazing cartoon!

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The animation is not amazing, but it's better than many other amateur animations. You seemed to have tried, but it's way too short to see what actually is happening. The animation is a bit too rough. Even if you were aiming for a rough animation style, it would be best to clean it up and make it flow a bit more smoothly.

It was too short. You should have added more to it.

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