Thank you for your first game.
Everything started with something.
But dialogs in begining of the game are too fast
(English isn't native language for me).
And end-screen should be the more beautiful, because it should be reward for walkthrough.
(I watched, you corrected it in your next games)
Dignities of the game:
Good fantasy of author let her create new small world.
Beside, all we like to dream about other worlds, even if they are a bit creepy.
Game isn't too hard and justifies the title "flash game".