I'm not sure if its the joke or not but you need more that one angle. Nice drawings. Good voice but I don't think I could watch much more

i didn't find a joke in thier! but still you got good animation cartoons and i think more working in your skills would be good. good lack in your next animation

prettymuch the same thing as blackkitsune down there. nothing funny about it, theres minimal animation, and its just all around complete randomness. aside from things being drawn half decently theres not much I can realy say that's good about this at all. constructive criticism? hire someone to write jokes for you.