Well it got off to an okay start. Lets see if it picks up
This is actually only the first episode from 2013! We're currently on Season 3, all of which is available here on Newgrounds!
I bet this must have been remarkable back in the day. (No offense)
Can't wait to see how much you've improved in the second season.
Well, lucky for you, this was from back in the day (2 years ago) All of Season 2 is now Newgrounds and Youtube!
audio could use a little more work as well as the animation but its a pretty good animation
The characters in this are pretty likeable.
For future episodes, my only suggestion would to be to pick up the pace a bit, or add more music, as the moments without movement or sound could be a bit distracting at times.
Considering this is your first submission here, It stands out. It looks like the people involved in the production had fun, and put care and effort into the finished product, which is more than I can say for some people who post on this site. Nice work.
Audio wasn't good and the animation was bad. The script was good though. Just work on animation and audio then it'll be great. Might want to try to make your own backgrounds instead of using pictures. It takes away from the cartoon world illusion that you are trying to create.
Wait for tomorrow. I will be releasing our 4th episode, which improves on both of those problems. This episode I made about a year ago when I first started Flash. This latest one I'm about to post I made 2 months ago.