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Alien Daze 19: TR-3B

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The two scientists from Area 51 escape to the moon in a prototype UFO while offering a plausible explanation for how it works. Meanwhile, the Plutocracy is planning its next stage of attack.

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...It's alright.

A lot of effort was clearly put into this. I know which program you've used to make this though; but it's been like AGES since I last used it (approximately 6 years if I'm correct). "Storybook Creator", I believe it was called? Something like that I assume.

Voice-acting could use a bit of work, and maybe tune down the sounds a little bit so it's not ear-rape (but then again, I'm wearing headphones so I shouldn't be complaining).

If there's one thing I have to compliment you on though, I have to say, it's on the fact that you made some really good dialogue. I have to admit, I liked some of the lines, and especially with the description of the spaceship. As a writer myself, not even I would be able to go so down and deep into detail.

Overall, using only these resources, I can say that you made the most out of it and that you did a good job. I remember using the program as a kid and I'm certain it really doesn't get any better than this. It's not a flexible system to use, so maybe you could move on to bigger and better things once you have the time to practice.

Keep striving bro. I have a feeling you can make it somewhere.

~Spirit


AmazonBoobs2626 responds:

Thanks Spirit. This is a side project for me. I chose the medium because its the quickest, simplest way for me to "animate" this story that I have in my head. But you're right, the medium is the one major drawback to this series. Unfortunately, I doubt I'm going to learn how to replace it with anything better anytime soon.

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