...It's alright.

A lot of effort was clearly put into this. I know which program you've used to make this though; but it's been like AGES since I last used it (approximately 6 years if I'm correct). "Storybook Creator", I believe it was called? Something like that I assume.

Voice-acting could use a bit of work, and maybe tune down the sounds a little bit so it's not ear-rape (but then again, I'm wearing headphones so I shouldn't be complaining).

If there's one thing I have to compliment you on though, I have to say, it's on the fact that you made some really good dialogue. I have to admit, I liked some of the lines, and especially with the description of the spaceship. As a writer myself, not even I would be able to go so down and deep into detail.

Overall, using only these resources, I can say that you made the most out of it and that you did a good job. I remember using the program as a kid and I'm certain it really doesn't get any better than this. It's not a flexible system to use, so maybe you could move on to bigger and better things once you have the time to practice.

Keep striving bro. I have a feeling you can make it somewhere.

~Spirit