It was alright, a bit more animation would be nice, and you should try to improve your English so that you can voice act instead of using a computer.
Other than that it was great and I got what you were talking about.
The MS Sam voice was terribly annoying, always is. Regardless, what's here isn't exactly BAD, but it's not that good. Personally, I didn't really find any humor in it, coupled with the short length and slideshow-style presentation, really makes me not want to give it more than two stars.