This looks great but only 3 scenes is too short. Bet I'll love it when its finished though.

What you have hints at something decent in the future, but this is nowhere near ready to be put up. The art is fantastic, but the construction isn't finished, and there's just not enough to it yet.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck. :)

This was great!! but one thing ..... What did the rat see!? I wanna know! xD

The art is great, It's just that the video is too short.

It's not bad for what it is, but there's really no reason for this to exist in the portal.