the writing was clearly done by someone who was pretty young, the animation would do strange things at points though I think this was done on purpose, and the acting was not very good however the audio was not "filtered" (or what ever you what to call it) properly, to fix this go into the fla's properties and change the audio from what ever it was on to mp3, set mono to stereo, and switch all of the numbers from 16 to 180.