using memes isn't a funny way to engage your audience. its a way to exploit lapses in creative thought. you need to work on your writing and try a new direction. if need be, watch older cartoons and notice the rhythmic timing to the music as things happen.
try word twisting, elevate the audience from just "guys love boobs and stuff fuckfuckfuck video games meme man bro"
there's more to the art of animation than that.
for what it is, its well animated generally speaking, but its the writing and the audio that hurt this so much.
visuals, as hard as they are to make, are the last thing on your audience's mind at the time they watch something. they need substance to be able to keep looking at it. remember that.