This was quite a unique short. It was informative, lightly comedic and had a slight "business" professional feel to it. Audio was decent in a serious based tone for the topic/subject and matter. Although it might be 'bland' to others liking or taste, I find it out of great respect to be a decent flash animation in its own right. The only thing that is only a minor fault is the lack of a start or restart button throughout this whole presentation. Regardless, this is only a minor setback. In overall in this review, I congratulate you on a job well done! I'm bestowing you a decent 3 in a half out of 5. And a 4/5 in voting power. I hope you've enjoyed this review as much as i have enjoyed your animated short. Keep practicing and excelling in this route, I see good animation potential out of you! Have a great day good sir.
Author Comments
This is an animated short I made on management of time. It Loops so make sure you right click and turn that off. I'm new to this so bare with me. Interested in your ideas on the subject. Let me know what you think.
Thank you very kindly for your feedback. I apologize for the lack of a start/restart button, a bit new to flash, and was unaware of how to put one in. This peice was a bit rushed but I was happy with it overall, I was trying to convey to the viewer that, in our modern fast paced society, we do not really have much time to spend on ourselves, and our loved ones. Which forces us to make sacrifices in areas where we normally wouldn't . Take for example education, which is more often than not sacrificed for entertainment. Overstandable, as most will not subject themselves to anything for any extended period of time if that thing is not at least somewhat entertaining. As for the bland tone of voice, I must say that this is something that I have to work on. I read books of a somewhat scholastic nature for audio recordings, and, as I am sure you can tell it tends to rub off. Thank you again for your kind words and encouragement, it helps make these tasks all that much more enjoyable.
Amazing
Wonderful
Very professional narration. Animations are a minimal but effective.
Thank you.