It's nicely made prototype and I hope you finish the game.
Nice music ...cough* :D

Look, I am a gamer just like everybody else here, and I always give a game a shot even if people be hatin'. But, the god d*** game won't load, I gets halfway and then stops. Please fix this, as I would love to play this game. So I say 1/2 a star for now, but if I play later when it is fixed, I will give my true rating.

It loads, but it won't start. It looks interesting, I hope it has a happy ending.

Game won't load for me, but after reading the other reviews i think it's safe to say this game's pretty bad.

Here's a tip. Don't post prototypes into the game portal. Put them into the dumping grounds so you can work on them.

I had graphical glitches : no background and no ground. The rest is quite nice, but it needs to be turned into a real game (for the moment, it "tells" no story...)