Only because I didn't know how to feel about this one.
A video of inside a Taliban Training Camp.
Written And Created By Chris Gorman
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Only because I didn't know how to feel about this one.
Was a bit funny but really could have been better as the previous comments suggested, the sync was what i didnt like other wise the joke did make me laugh a bit and the art work though a bit basic was quite good. Anyways good job :d
the sync was off; the joke was not funny. and it's clearly stereotyping, providing a false image of suicide bombers: actual terrorists have special "dispensations" allowing them to shave their beard, drink alcohol etc in order to blend in with their environment and thus making more casualties.
on the plus side the animation was basic but not bad.
before watching i tought it would be the teacher blowing himself and his class up (as recently happened in iran) reality is funnier. besides a suicide bomber who only blows himself up = fail.
Can't argue with that, the timing is off, it's only my second time doing lip sync so its actually better than the first time, so I am improving, also I felt there was no punch line to end it.
Your art style is what gets me off, just you need more practice.
but still very funny, i understand your timing was off though, for a good joke.
you always need timing, the beats were missed, comedy is like music.
alot of things are like music, you can't miss the beats, or noone is relaxed. (:
hopefully this helps you mister Gorman. ~TimFelt
Thanks for the feedback sir, I agree it was off and I do need more practice, - Chris