Great way to end the first volume! eagerly awaiting part two now. They keep getting better. I think you are really starting to hit your stride with these. I told you they would catch on eventually! great work and keep it up!
!- This is the 5th ep for part 1 -!
kurumi matsuokais living alone her father ran away and left a debt one day some one gets inside her apartment and attacking her and then carl black a young detective saves her...
Great way to end the first volume! eagerly awaiting part two now. They keep getting better. I think you are really starting to hit your stride with these. I told you they would catch on eventually! great work and keep it up!
thank you (\\\^-^\\\)♥♥♥
It's really interesting *o* I want mooooore
Oh, yes. For me, a novel visual IS A GAME.
thank you i see a visual novel as a game too ♥♥♥
I want soooooooooooooooo much more!! ;_:
im working on chapter two but it will take some time becase of school tests annoying (T-T)
thank you so much for reading !!♥♥♥
Honestly, I'm enjoying this so far. The story has me wanting more every time, and I always find myself coming back!
(\\\:^:\\\) thank you sob*
i think it's a good story, but it's not a game.
yes i know but i didn't knew where to put it and actually it is a game its called visual novel no never mind it your right thanks for reading