The colors used in the background are really garish; try using more subdued colors, especially since the background is not the focus of the cartoon. Also try using a preloader/ replay button so I don't have to right-click and unselect "play" to get it to stop.
Author Comments
This was a school project for my Animation Fundamentals class, simply to make a (minimum) 30 second cartoon based on whatever we want using everything we've learned (symbols, sounds, walk cycles, etc). This cartoon was inspired by those old Nickelodeon shorts that would during commercials or between main shows. Took about 3 weeks to finish until I was satisfied, and this is the result of those 3 fun weeks. Hope you like it.
